Thursday, July 7, 2011

fly haiku

fly circles

whizzing the lampshade

toes twitch nervously


  1. AnonymousJuly 08, 2011

    You've been busy! Some great Haiku here. Good reading for me as I try and learn
    Dole queue my fav
    Well done Rachel

  2. We can never conquer them, can we? A true haiku moment here...with that twitch of the toes!!!

  3. Barbara, many thanks for your comments. The flies really are funny to watch with their feet/toes. Love Maire x

  4. Rach,
    Thank you for your lovely comments, you are inspiration for me as I watch you grow and learn so fast. You are creating wonderful haiku and cinquain, your learning curve is a straight line, loving your work. Maire x