Thursday, March 8, 2012

cane senyru

her old cane
leans by the back door
once an oak tree


  1. __Lovely, and leaving these questions: is it the cane, the back door, or is it that they both were once... an oak tree.
    __Lingering and imaginative questions, I think, are a prime interest of haiku/senryu.

  2. Magyar, thank you for your comment, I appreciate it a lot. Yes, I agree, haiku has to have a certain amount of ambiguity for the reader to get their own meaning. Maire

  3. Magyar, thank you, I just found your work and find it wonderful:)) Maire